The Drawing That Fell Out of His Lunch Bag

Maya Lin

The other guards laughed at his bologna sandwiches, until one of them found what was folded in his lunch bag

“Same sandwich again, Hersh?” Jace Wimberly said, grinning. “You know they make apps for food now, right?”

The other guards in the break room at Riverbend Medical Plaza in Evansville, Indiana, laughed.

Herschel Gaddy just smiled and unwrapped his lunch. Bologna on day-old bread, folded in wax paper and carried in an old bread bag. A dented green thermos of coffee. One apple.

Every single day.

Herschel was sixty-six. He’d worked security there for eight years, always on time, always polite. Lately he’d been picking up every extra shift on the schedule. Nights. Weekends. Holidays.

“Must be saving up for a yacht,” Jace joked.

Jace was twenty-seven. He ordered lunch on his phone every afternoon and didn’t think twice about it. He liked Hersh well enough. He just liked an easy laugh more.

But he’d noticed things lately. Hersh skipping coffee from the vending machine. Wearing the same pair of work shoes with the sole coming loose. Taking phone calls in the stairwell and coming back quiet.

Once, Jace had heard him say, “Yes, ma’am, I understand. I’ll have the rest by the fourteenth.”

On Thursday, Hersh got called away to a parking lot alarm and left his bread bag on the break room table. When Jace reached past it for the salt, it tipped over.

Out slid the bologna sandwich, the apple, and a folded sheet of paper.

Jace picked it up to put it back. It fell open in his hand.

It was a drawing, done in crayon. A small house with a crooked chimney. Three stick figures holding hands out front, a tall one with gray hair and two little ones on either side.

Across the top, in large, wobbly letters, a child had written:

GRANDPA’S HOUSE. SOON?

Jace stood there holding it.

Behind him, the break room door opened, and Hersh stopped in the doorway, looking at the paper in Jace’s hand.

“Put That Back, Please”

Nobody laughed this time.

The salt shaker was still under Jace’s fingers. He set it down too hard, and the glass knocked against the table.

“I wasn’t snooping,” he said.

Hersh looked at the paper. Then at Jace. His face didn’t change much, but the skin around his mouth pulled tight.

“I know.”

“It fell out.”

“I know that too.”

Jace held the drawing toward him. “I was just putting it back.”

Hersh took it. He folded it once along the old crease, then again, careful with the crayon marks. The little blue house disappeared inside his hand.

“Caleb made that,” he said.

“Your grandson?”

“Yeah.”

“How old is he?”

“Six.”

“And the other kid?”

“His sister. Molly. Four.”

Hersh put the drawing back in the bread bag. He didn’t sit down.

Jace glanced at the sandwich. “You’re trying to get them a house?”

Hersh’s eyes went to the doorway behind Jace, as if he expected someone else to come in and make this worse.

“I’m trying to get them somewhere they can sleep without listening to a washing machine run all night.”

Jace had no answer for that.

Hersh picked up his thermos. “Alarm was a false call. Somebody pulled the door on the west garage.”

He walked out.

At 12:18, Jace ordered two sandwiches from the deli across the street. One turkey, one roast beef, chips, cookies, two bottles of cold tea. He carried the bag to the security desk and set it beside Hersh’s clipboard.

Hersh looked at it.

“What’s that?”

“Lunch.”

“I have lunch.”

“I saw.”

Hersh stared at him long enough that Jace wished he’d bought nothing.

Then Hersh pushed the bag back. “Don’t do that.”

“It’s just food.”

“It’s not just food when you’re standing there waiting for me to thank you.”

Jace opened his mouth. Nothing useful came out.

Hersh turned back to the camera screens. On the smallest screen, a woman in pink scrubs crossed the lobby with a paper cup in her hand.

“Go eat your sandwich,” Hersh said.

Jace took the bag and went.

The House on Maple Grove

The next morning, Jace arrived early.

He had been working at Riverbend for eleven months. He knew who smoked behind the loading dock, who slept in the patrol cart during lunch, who took home the free pens, and which nurses cried in the stairwell after a bad shift.

He didn’t know where Hersh lived.

So he asked.

“Maple Grove,” Hersh said.

“Near the old middle school?”

“Past it.”

“Big place?”

“Not anymore.”

That was all Hersh offered.

Jace looked up Maple Grove on his phone during his break. The neighborhood sat east of the river, where the sidewalks broke apart at driveways and most houses had chain-link fences. He found a listing for a little white house with green shutters. Two bedrooms, one bathroom, a carport leaning to the left.

The asking price was $78,000.

The photograph showed a kitchen with yellow cabinets and a stove missing one knob.

Jace stared at it for a while.

That evening, while Hersh was checking visitor badges, Jace said, “Is your house for sale?”

Hersh kept looking at the badge.

“No.”

“You buying that place?”

“No.”

Jace nodded like the answers made sense together.

Hersh sighed. “My daughter and the kids are staying at the Budget Lodge on Burkhardt. She got behind on rent after her hours were cut. Then the landlord changed the locks. She’s working now, but the motel takes most of what she makes.”

“What about the kids’ dad?”

“Gone.”

“Gone where?”

“Last I heard, Terre Haute. Before that, jail. Before that, nobody knew.”

Hersh stamped a visitor pass.

“My daughter’s name is Denise,” he said. “She’s not lazy. She’s made some bad choices. There’s a difference, though sometimes the bills don’t care.”

Jace watched him put the pass into the tray.

“So you’re buying the house for them?”

“I’m trying.”

“How much do you need?”

“More than I have.”

That answer sounded like Hersh. Plain. No complaint tucked behind it.

He had owned his house since 1999. His wife, Marlene, had worked at a laundry until her hands stopped cooperating. She died in February 2021 after a stroke, leaving behind a freezer full of casseroles and a stack of library books she never returned.

The house had been paid off for years.

Then the roof began leaking.

Then the furnace went out during a January cold snap.

Then Denise called from the motel with Caleb coughing in the background and Molly asking whether the room had a bathtub.

Hersh took money from his savings. He put repairs on a credit card. He borrowed from his union account. He called the bank about a home-equity loan and learned that his credit had taken a beating from the medical bills after Marlene’s stroke.

The little house on Maple Grove wasn’t his.

It belonged to a woman named Phyllis Rudd, who had moved to Kentucky to live with her sister. She had agreed to sell it to Hersh for $72,000 if he could produce a down payment by November 14.

That was the date Jace had heard in the stairwell.

Hersh had $6,840 saved.

He needed $7,200.

The difference was not much to a bank.

It was a wall to him.

What He Had Been Hiding

On Monday, Jace brought a box of doughnuts to the break room.

He put it on the table before anybody arrived. There were twelve doughnuts, all glazed except for one powdered thing he didn’t trust.

When Randy Pike came in, he pointed at the box.

“Somebody die?”

“No.”

“Then what’s this?”

“Food.”

Randy looked at him. “Did Hersh write you into his will?”

Jace didn’t smile.

Randy’s mouth stayed open for half a second. “What?”

“Nothing.”

Hersh came in at 6:02, carrying the bread bag.

Jace slid a doughnut toward him.

Hersh looked at the doughnut, then at Jace.

“I’m not hungry.”

“You haven’t seen it yet.”

“It’s a doughnut.”

“Exactly.”

Hersh sat down. He didn’t take one. He pulled out his sandwich and put the bread bag beside his knee.

Randy grabbed a glazed doughnut. “This is weird.”

“Then don’t eat it,” Jace said.

Randy ate it.

The teasing stopped after that, though not because everyone had become decent overnight. It stopped because Jace started staring at people until they ran out of jokes.

A week later, he saw Hersh in the hospital lobby with a boy wearing a red coat.

The boy had a toy truck in one hand and a runny nose. A little girl stood beside him, gripping a pink backpack with both hands. Denise was there too, thinner than Jace expected, her dark hair pulled into a knot that had partly fallen out.

Hersh crouched to zip Molly’s coat.

“Grandpa, can we see the fish?”

“There aren’t fish here.”

“Yes, there are. Caleb saw them.”

“They’re on the sign.”

The sign outside the children’s clinic had a cartoon fish on it.

“That’s not a real fish,” Hersh said.

Molly considered this. “It looks real.”

Hersh looked up and saw Jace.

For a second, neither of them spoke.

Then Denise said, “This him?”

Hersh stood. “This is Jace. He works security.”

“The sandwich guy?”

Jace looked at Hersh.

Hersh rubbed his forehead. “I told her about the lunchroom.”

Denise gave Jace a tired smile. “Sorry.”

“No, it’s fine.”

“She says you all pick on him.”

“I didn’t say all,” Hersh said.

Denise looked at Jace again. “You were one of them?”

Jace could have lied. He almost did.

“Yeah.”

The boy in the red coat pushed his truck across the lobby floor. It hit a chair leg and tipped over.

Denise looked down at it. “He’s been saving every dollar for that house. I keep telling him he doesn’t have to.”

Hersh said, “Denise.”

“What? It’s true.”

“He doesn’t need to know all that.”

“He already knows the house.”

Jace looked at Hersh.

Denise folded her arms. “He sold Marlene’s car. He’s working nights. He won’t let me pay the motel bill because he says I need to save for the deposit. He’s got his own bills, but apparently those don’t count.”

Hersh’s cheeks had gone red.

“Denise,” he said again.

The girl tugged his sleeve. “Grandpa, I have to go.”

“Bathroom’s down there.”

“I can’t go alone.”

“I’ll take you.”

He started down the hall with her.

Jace stayed with Denise and the boy.

She picked up the toy truck and brushed a speck of dirt from one wheel. “He thinks if he gets that house, everything fixes itself.”

“Will it?”

“No.”

She said it without anger.

Then she looked toward the hallway where Hersh had disappeared.

“But the kids would sleep better.”

The Envelope in the Desk

Hersh did not want a fundraiser.

Jace found that out in the worst possible way.

On Thursday afternoon, he told Randy, Marcy, and two nurses from the outpatient wing that they could each throw in ten dollars. Randy offered twenty. Marcy said she could ask her church.

By Friday morning, Jace had a coffee can under the desk with $146 inside.

Hersh found it while checking the visitor log.

“What’s this?”

Jace leaned back in his chair. “You know what it is.”

“I told you not to do that.”

“You told me not to buy you lunch.”

“I told you not to make me a project.”

“You’re not a project.”

“Then why’s my name written on a coffee can?”

Jace looked at the can. He had written HOUSE on a strip of masking tape.

Hersh picked it up. The coins inside shifted.

“Take it back.”

“People gave it.”

“Take it back.”

“Hersh.”

“I worked since I was seventeen. I paid my taxes. I kept my wife alive as long as the doctors could keep her alive. I raised a daughter who keeps getting knocked down and stands back up wrong. I can handle my own money.”

Jace had never heard him raise his voice.

Hersh set the can down.

Then he reached into his jacket and took out an envelope.

It was white, folded at one corner, with a law office name printed in blue.

“I’m not buying that house for Denise,” he said.

Jace looked at the envelope.

“I’m buying it for the kids.”

The words sat between them.

Hersh rubbed his thumb over the edge of the paper.

“Denise has been sober nine months. She’s working at the laundry on Stringtown Road. She goes to meetings. She’s trying. But the county won’t let the kids leave the motel with her unless she has a proper place and somebody willing to take responsibility if she slips.”

“Are you taking them?”

“I’m asking for kinship placement. Temporary guardianship. Maybe longer.”

Jace looked at the house listing still open on his phone.

“You’d raise them?”

“I already raised one.”

“That was a long time ago.”

“I remember.”

Hersh sat down in the chair across from him. The security cameras showed the empty lobby, the revolving doors, the ambulance bay under a gray sky.

“Denise thinks I’m rescuing her. I’m not. She has to do her part. If she wants those kids home, she has to keep working, keep going to court, keep showing up.”

“And if she doesn’t?”

Hersh looked at the envelope.

“Then the kids come to me.”

Jace thought of the drawing. The crooked chimney. The three figures.

“She wrote ‘Grandpa’s House. Soon?'”

“Caleb did.”

“Why the question mark?”

“Because I told him not to get excited.”

Jace looked down at the coffee can.

Hersh pushed it toward him. “Put it in the break room. Tell them it’s for the children’s clinic or something.”

“You’re still not taking it?”

“No.”

“You need six hundred dollars.”

“Three hundred and sixty.”

“What happened to the rest?”

Hersh pulled a folded receipt from his pocket.

“Phyllis Rudd called this morning. She said she’d take $6,900 if I could close by the fourteenth.”

Jace stared at him. “That’s in two weeks.”

“I know.”

“And you’re short three hundred and sixty dollars.”

“I know that too.”

The Fourteenth

The money came in pieces.

Marcy brought forty dollars in a birthday card. Randy put in seventy-five and complained about it for three days. One of the nurses slipped a hundred-dollar bill into the coffee can without telling anyone.

The hospital cafeteria manager gave Hersh a week of free lunches. Hersh refused the first two, then accepted a bowl of chili after Jace told him refusing it was more insulting than eating it.

Even Jace’s younger brother, who had never met Hersh, sent twenty dollars through a payment app.

Hersh kept saying no.

People kept putting money down.

By November 13, the coffee can held $418.

Hersh counted it at the security desk. He stacked the bills by size, then counted again.

Jace was sitting beside him.

“You’re over,” Jace said.

“By fifty-eight dollars.”

“Then buy a better sandwich.”

Hersh gave him a look.

“Bad joke,” Jace said.

“Very.”

Hersh placed the money in an envelope. He wrote Phyllis Rudd’s name on the front in block letters.

At 4:40 the next morning, his daughter called the security desk.

Jace answered.

“Is Hersh there?”

“He’s checking the north entrance.”

“Can you get him?”

Jace saw Hersh at the end of the hall, speaking to a delivery driver.

“Yeah.”

Hersh walked over.

“What happened?”

Denise didn’t answer right away. Jace could hear a television through the phone. Some morning show audience clapping.

Finally, she said, “I got fired.”

Hersh closed his eyes.

“I missed work because Molly had a fever. The motel manager said she could stay in the room alone, but I wasn’t going to do that. I called in.”

“How high?”

“102.7.”

“Where is she now?”

“Sleeping.”

“Did you take her to urgent care?”

“Not yet. I don’t have the money.”

Hersh looked at Jace. The phone was still against his ear.

“I’ll come after my shift.”

“No, Dad.”

“I’ll come.”

“You have to close on the house.”

“I can close at three.”

“You can’t be in two places.”

“I’ll be there.”

“No.” Her voice broke. “Don’t do this. Don’t keep trying to hold everybody up.”

Hersh looked down at the floor.

Jace turned away, but he could still hear Denise.

“I signed the papers,” she said.

“What papers?”

“The caseworker came yesterday. I signed the temporary placement.”

Hersh’s hand tightened around the phone.

“What are you saying?”

“I’m saying the kids go with you.”

A truck rumbled past outside. The glass doors shook in their frames.

Denise kept talking.

“I don’t want them at the motel anymore. I don’t want Caleb asking if the police are coming when somebody knocks. I don’t want Molly sleeping in her coat. You can give them a yard. You can give them a bathtub. I can still get them back.”

Hersh sat down in the chair beside the desk.

“I know you can.”

“I’m serious.”

“I know.”

“You better not make it easy for me to stay gone.”

His face changed then. Not much. His mouth moved, and he pressed his fingers against it.

“I won’t,” he said.

What Was Written on the Back

Hersh closed on the house at 3:15.

Jace drove him there because Hersh’s truck had a dead battery. They stopped at a grocery store first for cereal, milk, bananas, laundry soap, and a plastic shower curtain with blue fish on it.

Hersh stood in the aisle comparing two brands of macaroni.

“Get both,” Jace said.

“That’s how people waste money.”

“It’s macaroni.”

“It adds up.”

Jace put both boxes in the cart.

Hersh frowned but didn’t remove one.

The house smelled like dust and old wood. The yellow cabinets were worse in person. One drawer had no handle. The upstairs bedroom had wallpaper peeling above the closet.

Hersh unlocked the front door and stepped inside.

He didn’t say anything.

Jace carried the groceries to the kitchen. Hersh walked through each room, touching the light switches. He opened the back door. The yard was narrow and full of dead leaves.

A child’s red plastic shovel lay near the fence.

It had probably belonged to the previous owner’s grandchild. It was cracked down the middle.

Hersh picked it up, examined it, and put it back.

His phone rang.

“Hello?”

It was Phyllis Rudd, calling from Kentucky to make sure the closing had gone through.

“Yes, ma’am. Thank you. We’ll take care of it.”

He listened.

“No, the roof should be all right until spring. I checked the attic.”

Another pause.

“I will. You too.”

He hung up.

Jace leaned against the counter. “You checked the attic?”

“Twice.”

“Of course you did.”

Hersh took the folded drawing from his jacket.

He opened it and looked at the crooked house. The paper had softened at the folds. One corner was dark from the inside of the bread bag.

“Caleb gave me this last Saturday,” he said.

“Why didn’t you tell me?”

“About the drawing?”

“About the guardianship.”

Hersh looked at the back of the paper.

There were words written there in pencil, smaller and shakier than the letters on the front.

Jace had not seen them before.

“What does it say?”

Hersh handed him the paper.

On the back, Caleb had written:

GRANDPA, IF MOM GETS BETTER, CAN SHE LIVE HERE TOO?

Jace read it once.

Then again.

Hersh took the drawing back. He folded it, but not along the old creases this time. He folded it inward, hiding the question.

“Where are you going to put it?” Jace asked.

Hersh looked toward the bare living room wall.

“Fridge.”

“There’s no fridge yet.”

“Tomorrow.”

His phone rang again.

This time, it was Denise.

Hersh answered.

“Hey, baby.”

Jace turned toward the window. Outside, a boy in a red coat was standing by the fence, holding a toy truck. Molly sat on the front step in a pink coat, kicking her boots against the concrete.

Hersh saw them through the glass.

He pressed the phone to his ear and opened the front door.

“Come on in,” he said.

Caleb ran past him first.

Molly followed, dragging her backpack.

Hersh stayed in the doorway, still holding the phone. He looked down at the cracked red shovel in the leaves, then at the empty living room.

On the other end, Denise said something.

Hersh listened.

“Yeah,” he said. “There’s room.”

He held the door wider.

“Bring your things.”

If this stayed with you, pass it along to someone who could use a little more kindness today.

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